The Rage

Yet another writing I wanted to turn into a song. I think if I can just write a good chorus I could easily turn it into a song. In fact I noticed three places where the chorus (if it existed) would fit nicely while I was writing and put spaces in those places.

I feel it lurking,
like my shadow,
it's always with me,
not always visible,
but it's just waiting,
to make it's presence known.

It's a fire,
not comforting,
like the fire in the hearth,
but terrrifying,
like the raging flames,
of an out of control forest fire.

It is a rage,
that turns my sight,
into a crimson blur.

It's not always seen,
but it's always felt,
it's a ghost,
just one step away,
from becoming the demon,
inside of me.

So if you think you've got a good idea for a chorus, let me know.